What Mumford and Sons Taught Me About Writing

If you’ve never listened to the group Mumford and Sons, you’re missing out. They’re an English folk band with some bluegrass and rock undertones. Like a lot of great bands, they inspire me to be a better writer.

Mumford and Sons: What They Taught Me About Writing

I’ve been listening Mumford for a while now, and it’s been great to see their talent recognized more in the mainstream lately. In fact, it’s hard for me to turn on the radio without hearing one of their songs.

They’re one of those groups (like Coldplay) that I can listen to and instantly get inspired.

I don’t know what you do to get inspired to be creative, but I tend to listen to music or go for runs.

Five Creativity Lessons from Mumford

I was recently admiring this band and realized that there were some takeaways from their music that any creative could apply:

1) Never underestimate the power of a well-placed expletive.

There is something powerful about a well-placed cuss word that doesn’t evoke the same sentiment as saying “darn” or “shoot.”

Of course, the temptation is to overuse profanity, which robs these words of their potency. When I listen to “Little Lion Man,” and Marcus delivers that powerful F-bomb (“I really f*cked it up this time, didn’t I, my dear?”), I feel the failure that he is singing about. It’s honest and emotive.

2) Everyone loves stories, especially epic ones.

We all love a good story. When I listen to “The Cave” I am taken back to another time — a time of struggle and pain, of war and famine. I’m not even sure what the song is about, but there is this tension that unfolds musically, ultimately resolving in triumph:

I’ll find strength in pain
And I will change my ways
I’ll know my name as it’s called again.

As the harmonized voices conclude the song, you can sense resolution. Whatever conflict the character was facing in this narrative has been overcome, and you can feel it in the music. With art, how you say something is just as important as what you say.

3) Transparency is essential to building trust.

Mumford’s songs are full of brokenness — sung by a man who has seen the dark side of life. They’re not unrealistically optimistic, but neither are they overly pessimistic. They speak to the real hardships and struggles of life that we all face.

As a writer, I’m learning that being able to relate to my audience honestly by sharing my own shortcomings is essential to building trust.

4) Great art eventually gets rewarded.

Mumford doesn’t sound like most of the stuff you hear on the radio. (I mean, seriously, who else is getting away with using a banjo as one of their lead instruments?)

And yet, they’re starting to get recognized by the public. Without compromising their art or changing their style, they’re beginning to be rewarded for their creativity, to the extent that they even received a Grammy nomination, performed onstage with Bob Dylan, and were recently covered by Taylor Swift.

5) People are fascinated with the divine.

Mumford and Sons’ songs are chock full of spiritual undertones, as is clear in “Awake My Soul“:

Awake my soul
You were made to meet your maker.

I’ve read interviews about Mumford not claiming to be a “Christian band” but admitting that faith is something they’ve struggled with, which is evident in “Roll Away Your Stone” and “Hold on to What You Believe”.

Mumford and Sons are singing about what matters — about human struggles and divine providence. And that’s the aspiration of every creative — to create art that truly makes a difference.

What do bands like Mumford and Sons teach you about writing or creativity? Join the discussion in the comments section.

 

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Jeff Goins

I help people tell better stories and make a difference in the world. I live in Tennessee with my wife and dog. Follow me on Twitter and Facebook.

  • http://www.edwardpaz.com Edward Paz

    “Great are eventually gets rewarded.”

    I needed that today. Thanks Jeff!

    • http://www.edwardpaz.com Edward Paz

      *great art

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      indeed it does, edward. i look forward to the day that your art is recognized by more people.

  • http://www.facebook.com/people/Mike-Nagel/13803370 Mike Nagel

    Love your music taste… both Mumford & Sons and the Civil Wars have been on heavy rotation on my iPod for the last few months.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      thanks, mike!

  • Amy Nabors

    I couldn’t agree more about the well placed expletive. When it’s done well you get it. I think groups like Mumford and Sons and The Civil Wars are becoming so popular because they are transparent in their song writing and that’s what people want to hear. Not over the top optimism or ranting pessimism, but simple honesty.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Exactly! You said it better than I could have, Amy. Thanks for the comment… and for reading.

  • http://twitter.com/andreamv Andrea Meyer

    I’m not familiar with Mumford, sorry, but I liked what you drew from their songs. Ironically, I read another post where someone pulled lessons from a fairy tale (in Danny Brown’s blog for bloggers) I’m posting it here so you can take a look for yourself. Thanks!!
    http://bestbloggingtipsonline.com/straw-into-gold-5-blogging-lessons-from-rumpelstiltskin/?utm_source=feedburner&utm_medium=feed&utm_campaign=Feed%3A+BloggingTipsForBloggers+%28For+Bloggers%2C+By+Bloggers%29

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Thanks Andrea. I’ll check it out.

  • http://davidsantistevan.com David Santistevan

    Good artists teach me to put my heart on display. Be honest. Tell people your view of the world as you see it. Don’t try and please the masses. This approach will make you some enemies but also raving fans, which is a good thing. I always think of Derek Webb who has done a great job with that as an indy artist.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Love Derek’s music. Thanks, David.

  • Hillhutch

    Great article. One band that really inspires me to be creative is Bon Iver. Like Mumford, they are also very inspiring and powerful.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Will have to check then out.

  • http://www.brookegale.com Brooke

    I love them. The truth in their music sets me free. Good art means raw vulnerability. It says: “You may feel segregated from the rest humanity because of the depth of your emotions, your pain and struggles, but guess what: you are not alone.” This is the most powerful connection you can make with someone.

    I love that the “mainstream” doesn’t have to be shallow. To use another well-placed expletive, people are sick of the bull sh**.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      You’re right, Brooke. Good art is freeing.

  • http://www.keithjennings.com Keith Jennings

    Brian Eno has a been a towering model for me. If you want to “go to school” on creativity and beauty, watch the Daniel Lanois’ film Here Is What Is. (Great music too!)

    I think great bands, like other great artists, give us permission to search, experiment and discover. They model this searching for us.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Well said, Keith!

  • http://movethemountains.blogspot.com Chad Jones

    Can’t stand Mumford & Sons! All that twangy banjo & stuff…

    Kidding! Totally love them. The songs get better & better the more I listen. I’m amazed (and not a little jealous) at sheer genius of Marcus’ lyrics. So pregnant with meaning.

    For instance, I listened to “Dust Bowl Days” on the way to see “True Grit,” & it was a pitch-perfect prologue to the film.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      I was about to blacklist you from my blog.

      • http://movethemountains.blogspot.com Chad Jones

        Dude! Glad you read the whole comment–otherwise “I’ll go out back and
        I’ll get my gun. I’ll say “you haven’t met me, I am the only son.”

        ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-)

        (Just so you know I’m totally kidding).

        • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

          Were you just kidding, Chad? I think maybe you need one more winky face to let me know. ;)

          • http://movethemountains.blogspot.com Chad Jones

            Ask, and ye shall receive:

            ;-)

            ;-p

  • http://twitter.com/PeterPaluska Peter Paluska

    Jeff,

    Excellent points. Yes, I am inspired by several bands and music artists for sure, most significantly XTC and Steely Dan. I also love listening to a lot of classical and classic jazz such as Lee Konitz or J.J. Johnson.
    Did you ever see the Martin Scorsese film “Life Lessons”, which is part of the “New York Stories” omnibus? I love those scenes of Nick Nolte painting with Bob Dylan’s “Like a Rolling Stone” blasting on the huge boom box. There is a passion that borders on obscene in those moments.

    Great piece, Jeff!

    Peter

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Never saw it. Will have to check it out.

  • ric booth

    I absolutely love these guys. I have them on my phone, my computer, and in my car. And I love each of the same songs you bring up. Their songs have a poetic quality that stands on it’s own.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      I agree, Ric.

  • http://eileenknowles.blogspot.com eileen

    “As a writer, I’m learning that being able to relate to my audience honestly by sharing my own shortcomings is essential to building trust.” Totally agree. I also agree that music has a huge impact on my writing too. I run as well..it’s the best time to think and reflect! Nice post.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Great minds…

  • http://twitter.com/robrash robrash

    Good post Jeff. Love Mumford and Sons. And I love ‘Little Lion Man’ and that is saying something coming from a worship pastor. The use of the F bomb is perfect, it fits the emotion of the song.

    Unfortunately, I’m disappointed Taylor Swift covered one of their songs… ;)

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Thanks, Rob! And watcha got against Taylor? Did you hear the cover? It was pretty good.

  • Frank Burder

    Well said my friend. Great band and great insights.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Thanks frank. Love your taste in music.

  • http://www.jeremysconfessions.com Jeremy@confessionsofalegalist

    To answer your question about what other mainstream band uses a banjo as a lead instrument try the Avett Brothers. Very similar style. Life searching lyrics with bluegrass/rock music. I haven’t read much of your blog yet, but I will be looking for that well placed expletive.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Love the Avett Bros

  • http://www.famousontheinside.com Carol

    What inspires me is going out to live shows and being in the presence of so many people and being together on that musical high. We may disagree on many levels but at that moment in the music hall we are all in agreement. I had this experience this past weekend at the Ryman watching, listening and experiencing Amos Lee and his band! Spectacular and inspirational.

    • http://goinswriter.com Jeff Goins

      Love the Ryman!

  • guest

    Here’s another lesson, don’t over use words. The word ‘heart’ appears in every single song on the album Sigh No More.

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      Hmmm…

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      Hmmm…

  • http://www.storywrought.wordpress.com Lizzie

    Mumford and Sons hands down!  My favorite song is ”Dust Bowl Dance” because it’s so packed with emotion and story…and those two elements make me instantly want to write something equally as powerful. 

    Other bands?  U2, Jakob Dylan, Matthew Mayfield, The Daylights, NEEDTOBREATHE, etc.  Sometimes it’s not even the words that inspire writing, sometimes it’s the music itself.  When I hear truly beautiful music that resonates with me, I instinctively create a story to fit that music.   

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      Thanks, Lizzie. I’m a big NEEDTOBREATHE fan, too. Love your style!

  • http://www.storywrought.wordpress.com Lizzie

    Mumford and Sons hands down!  My favorite song is ”Dust Bowl Dance” because it’s so packed with emotion and story…and those two elements make me instantly want to write something equally as powerful. 

    Other bands?  U2, Jakob Dylan, Matthew Mayfield, The Daylights, NEEDTOBREATHE, etc.  Sometimes it’s not even the words that inspire writing, sometimes it’s the music itself.  When I hear truly beautiful music that resonates with me, I instinctively create a story to fit that music.   

  • Anonymous

    I really like how you captured the group’s balance of optimism and pessimism – into a kind of blended realism. The most influential voices for change tend to be the most real because people rally beneath a banner that they can relate to. That’s the appeal of Christianity, we come broken to be fixed – every other faith tradition requires us to impossibly fix ourselves.

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      Broken to be fixed… I like that.

  • http://www.parabl.es Rich

    another good post. Am I the only one who thinks that dentists could use the “White Blank Page” Mumford & Sons song? ;)

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      I honestly don’t know that one. Will have to give it a listen.

  • http://suburbiauncovered.com/ Matt Powell

    I really love the sound and have listened to that album a lot… however, I do wrestle with #1 and their use of the f bomb (as we call it :) .  My issue is that I can’t help but ask how much value they placed on the attention they would receive.  In other words, did they say, “if we use this word that will get us some great media and attention?” 

    I don’t know if they did and I’m not even accusing them of doing that… but I’m not convinced the inclusion of that word was necessary to express the idea.  I’m nothing close to legalistic in my approach to life… but I’m uncomfortable with that song.  However, to show my position as extremely confused, I’m very supportive of free creative expression.

    I know… I sound ridiculous.  But I really have wrestled with this specific issue because I love that recording and their sound so much.

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      It’s contextual. They’re British. That’s not a stigmatized word like it is here. Always important to remember this about language.

      • http://suburbiauncovered.com/ Matt Powell

        ha! playing the contextualization card, eh? maybe it is… maybe… ;)

        • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

          Not a “card” to play, Matt. Have you spent much time with people who aren’t American?

          • http://suburbiauncovered.com/ Matt Powell

            Yea, the church I pastor has a significant international community-predominantly Asian.  I was “giving you a hard time” with the contextualization card comment.  My doctorate is under the umbrella of “intercultural studies” so I’m with you and very familiar with the idea…

            In sports when a team is having a bad year or years you always hear people say “its a building year.”  In other words, it just becomes an excuse.  In some circles the contextualization ‘card’ gets thrown around like that… I’m not saying at all you were doing that but that was the root of my failed attempt at kidding around with you :)   Sorry about the lack of clarity there…

            • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

              Ah. No prob. Just use an emoticon next time! They NEVER fail. ;)

    • http://www.seanrox.com/ seanrox

      Matt –The fear of simple words is debilitating. If inspiration only comes from the beginning — we may want to trust in creation. The intent is obvious… and brilliant in this case.

      peace, love & barbecue,seanrox

      • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

        mmmm, barbecue.

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  • sonya chisenhall

    Several weeks ago a speaker at my church talked about “rolling away your stone” and the first thing that came to mind was Mumford and Son. When I got home I plugged it in a really listened to it and became sucked back into the word pictures they painted. That’s what I love about them. They really think about what they are writing and I believe they take the time to perfect they lyrics. But more importantly, they write from a deep place inside themselves that few people are able to tap into.

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      Agreed, Sonya. Thanks for sharing.

  • http://rebootingworship.com/ Jamie Kocur

    A little bit of passion goes a long way. I love how Mumford & Sons puts everything they have into every song. They don’t hold back. 

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      me, too. it’s beautiful.

  • Mark Botts

    Mumford and Sons sing with moxy, passion, sweat, and tears. (Maybe a little blood, but that may seem macabre…maybe not.) Vocals, instruments, and lyrics weave together and pound the listener (and the listener’s soul) like a riptide against the shoreline; they make you listen to them.  
    As for a banjo leading the way – Needtobreathe is managing mass appeal with the bluegrass twang of the five-string fronting several of their hits: The Outsiders and Drive All Night. I’ve seen the South Caroline rock band twice in concert (once in Knoxville; once in Chattanooga)and they killed it!
    Both Mumford and Sons and Needtobreathe wear their hearts on their vocal chords, never shying from expressing spiritual/transcendent themes.
    These bands inspire.  

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      Moxy. Good word. :)

  • http://www.yTravelBlog.com/ yTravelBlog

    Love love love Mumford and Sons. i get so much from their music and this is really inspiring to see what you have learned from then as well.

  • http://fromthebungalow.wordpress.com/ Chris

    Excellent post. I agree that a well-placed expletive can be powerful. I related “The Cave” to my depression in a post last May: http://fromthebungalow.wordpress.com/2011/05/18/ill-know-my-name-as-its-called-again/. They’re a great band!

  • Jasmin

    I love music that takes me into a fantasy scenario. Like a great movie it can suck you in with melodies that are played directly to the heart and lyrics that tell stories of  incredible happiness, sadness , courage, commitment, resolution or revolution.
     My favourite artist to do this to me is Damien Rice. He is a genius. 

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      LOVE Damien! He’s another brilliant one. And Irish, too. Which is nice.

  • Marym11

    They’re ok, but, arguably owe more to American country/bluegrass than Irish trad or English folk.  Shame about the overtly religious tenor…

    • http://goinswriter.com/ Jeff Goins

      Weren’t bluegrass and country derived from Celtic music?

  • http://www.dodifferent.org.uk/ David Bunce

    The other essential tip is, of course, there’s no need to be all that original with your inspiration. 

    Mumford & Sons’ lyrics  are full of Shakespeare, the Odessy, Steinbeck, Midwest Literature – and are all the better for those influences.Why try and reinvent the wheel (and often get worse phrasing and ideas) when you have musical talent to reinterpret lasting and haunting words?

  • http://profile.yahoo.com/KYSTR6QKVESCAOFVO3RFTUFZZY Robin Hallett

    Hey Jeff! I am a newbie to your list. Wondering, is it too soon to say, “I love you”? :)

    I keep a music folder on my computer called Robin’s Writing Music. And, Mumford is at the top of my list! There are certain songs that just evoke a kind of emotional harmonic that makes writing come together in the best possible way.

    Thanks for all that you do, I have been enjoying your site. I feel super duper encouraged to keep writing.
    Thank you!!! x0 Robin